A man sits at an outside table, a pint of lager keeping him company. He looks sad, deep in thought. Maybe he isn't sad, maybe he is just contemplating life, the universe, a new job, a job far away from here. Maybe he has never been good at handling change, many people aren't, but a pint and some precious solitude are doing him a world of good.
Some surfers walk past on their way back from the beach, a black Labrador trotting after them. The tide is in, a toddler paddles in the shallows with her father. A yacht sails out of the harbour, it symbolises something, something he understands, freedom perhaps, or escape. Two men sit in a dinghy fishing, all you can hear is the wind, the rattling of rigging and the cry of sea birds. He'll miss this place.
He pops into the shop to get some essentials. An elderly couple blockade the basket pile, preventing all access while they debate about who carries what. Emerging from the shop he nearly gets knocked down by some imbecilic pavement-cyclist. He gives the fool a piece of his mind. As he walks away he smiles ruefully, some things will never change.
Monday, 27 July 2009
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As I have quite a few new readers since I became a "Jelly Biter" I've put this up here again. To understand the context you must read
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See...this is why you get awards. What awards you ask? Two with your name on it. Oh, don't blush. Oh, don't say how you hate awards shows and have nothing to wear. See my post today instead.
Since you left no room for smartass comments, may I just say I'm so glad the cyclist did you no permanent damage. And I hope the part of your mind that you gave him was expendable.
What is it with you and sea gulls?
Anyway, now I want to go to the beach more than ever, thanks to you. I've had several invites, but finding the time is something else.
I really liked this story Mo.
He's leaving? Why is he leaving Mo?
That was a beautiful portrait of words. Now I want to go to the beach.
If he gives the cyclist a piece of his mind, is he now a half-wit?
I realise now that this is not obviously autobiographical. But just so you know, it is!
A bit metaphorical today?
Great writing so when you read it out loud, it just flows off your tongue like sweet honey.
Yes, I read it out loud and no, it's not weird, okay; it's just that I like the sound of my own voice.
A nice slice of life. I liked it very, VERY much, Mo :)
Beautiful imagery Mo. This post made me smile..thanks for that!
Lovely & poetic. Thank you!
You make me not want to be at work.
So. Who do you connect with more - the sailboat or the fisher dingy?
Hahaha at blognut's comment.
Good stuff, man... and oh yeah, elderly people are fun to sit around and fart with...
Going down to the seaside in late July? Are you mad? I hope you put warm clothing on.
And that man's name...
...Was Mo "Grand Pooh-bah creative writing" Stoneskin.
Mo, just beautiful...
Great post! I felt like I was there, too!
Where you moving to Mo? You off up North?
Feeling the need for a little escape Mo?
Wonderful!
At least a seagull didn't pinch your chips. That would have really ruined your day.
Moving?
I was thinking this was your morning until I remembered a pint was involved! :D
Going somewhere, Mo? Just make sure it's somewhere with internet access...otherwise we'd all have to stalk you!
Nicely written, by the way!
Lovely --
Every time he beats on a cyclist now he'll fondly remember that scene.
Those constant familiars are a good reminder of how small our lives are... and to make the most of them. :-)
Time for a cycle-boy beatdown...
Where you headed, mate?
Wow, I've missed a lot! Read it all, though. Good stuff, as usual. Loved the baby puke story. Laughed... laughed a lot. With you. Not at you. Oh, OK, at you. I can't imagine you were laughing with a mouthful of baby puke, eh?
Are you contemplating a move to Mulletville? We don't have quaint shops or seagulls or a harbor, but we do have...
We do have...
Never mind.
Sigh.
Lovely post. Except for the a-hole cyclist of course.
The beach is my fave!
Having a quiet moment with a pint sounds lovely! I like to curl up with my coffee and newspaper in the morning.
You tell the best stories. You really do.
Thanks for letting us have a peep inside your heart on this one, mo. You're wonderful.
Beautifully written.
And yes. Now I want to be sitting by the beach sipping my cup of joe and staring out into the abyss...
Sigh.
Isn't it illegal to ride on the pavement? If not, it should be. Damn cyclists....
Seeing as I'm new to commenting on your posts, I'll keep it brief: Good stuff.
Pretty slick with the words there Mo...
It's a lot classier than ending it with "so he blew the bikers head off with a 12 gauge."
*loves drama*
how come you can write so snarky and then so poetic? why can't I do that?
"....smiling ruefully. Then he reached into his pocket and pulled out his Glock 9, and blew that sucker off the pavement. 'That'll teach him,' he thought. And then his smile was sardonic, not rueful."
What?
Oh ok...sorry....
Ooooooh pretty!
very nice, indeed.
Wonderful read, as always!
A pint and precious solitude do me a world of good, too.
So does knowing the more things change, the more they stay the same.
Wait! Wait! Wait!
Where are you going???? :(
It won't stop you from blogging will it???
Er ... not that I'm selfish or anything.
Ahem.
Oh, and btw, that was really lovely ... very evocative and more than a little melancholy, but lovely all the same.
I loved this. I loved it more than anything I've read for quite some time. Beautiful!
I would just like to add my name to the chorus of people wondering where you're off to Mo?
So you're moving to the U.S. then? We'd love to have you, with your weird words and all. You might have to leave the duck behind though.
You're making me miss LA and surfing. Were the surfers cute?
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